Eden continued 

God had EdenSatan had a pleasure park of rollercoasters, Pac-Man machines and souvenir shops 
(the queueswere long 

the merchandise over priced

the hot dogs cold)
and outside Eden 

the traffic stretched for miles

– cars full of screaming children and half eaten fruit

– cars full of fuming parents with half price vouchers stuffed in pockets 

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